Thesis statement: The individual, not society, is responsible for acedemis integrity.
Topic Sentance 1: Cheating is a huge problem.
Topic Sentance 2: Parents are not helping the problem.
Topic Sentance 3: Consequences for cheating are not consistent in schools across America.
Topic Sentance 4: Consistent non-tolerance of cheating is a must.
Conclusion: In conclusion, cheating must be met with harsh consequences. The individual need to learn that cheating has few positive effects, and only hurts the said individual in the long run. The individual, not society, is responsible for acedemic integrity.
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I liked your conclusion, but I think that if you replaced or took out the In conclusion at the beginning it might sound a little better.
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