Wednesday, January 16, 2008

Rewriting thesis statements.

1. Road rage causes numerious negative side effects on our highways, such as increased number of accidents and increased stress.

2. The amount of violence in Disney films has been growing over the past 10 years.

3. Army ants are much more organized and intelligent than bull ants.

4. Rescued animals are able to portray a feeling of thanks to that of their rescuer.

5. Deforestation is one of the many reasons for drought.

6. The Shining is one of Stephen King's best works.

7. The Titanic was much too large and poorly constructed to survive the Atlantic Ocean.

8. Drug addiction is sweeping through America's youth faster than ever.

9. Saving Private Ryan is an unaccurate and generally outlandish movie.

10. Rabbits make poor pets because of breeding issues, cost, and health problems.

11. Same

12. Beauty pageants are unrealistic facades that give little girls the impression that education is inferior to beauty.

13. School uniforms are necassary so that nobody has their own opinion and/or expression.

14. William Shakespeare was the greatest writer in English history.

15. Same

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